Talk:Mrs. Phillips

I know this page already exists, but this is better edited and easier to find. Pease delete the other one. Thanks in advance.


 * Easier to find? Do people tend to search for incorrectly names articles? Try to integrate the info on this page with the info on the Mrs. Philips page. Tom Talk 22:53, September 28, 2013 (UTC)


 * Additionaly, "retired Mother" is not a thing. Tom Talk 22:54, September 28, 2013 (UTC)

How to delete the extra "l" in the page's name ?


 * I've had a look at the other article, and it's just better. Grammatically this article isn't great. Tom Talk 22:59, September 28, 2013 (UTC)

What ? How can you say it is not "gramatically correct"?. I spend over half an hour making it.

spent* (sorry, writing in a hurry)


 * I get that you spent time making it, but you should have checked to see if there was an existing page beforehand. The major flaw is the fact that you've missed a lot of spaces out.

For example this: She appears to be very exigent,bossy,short-tempered and somehow loveless about Trevor.She is also a smoker, and will not stand back from a drink.

Should be: ''She appears to be very exigent, bossy, short-tempered and somehow loveless about Trevor. She is also a smoker, and will not stand back from a drink.''


 * Have you read the other article? I feel like the fact you've worked hard on this is clouding your judgment. Don't think the effort isn't appreciated. Tom Talk 23:07, September 28, 2013 (UTC)

But I checked before to see if there is any already-existent page, and no page appeared...


 * You probably spelled it wrong when you searched. Tom Talk 23:19, September 28, 2013 (UTC)


 * Sorry about this but I'm deleting the article. Tom Talk 23:23, September 28, 2013 (UTC)