User blog comment:Dan67/GTA4 Comic: Niko Meets a New Gang/@comment-26435037-20130415163534

This comic is kinda entertaining yet unoriginal (although it is really hard to get something original these days).

And I found some grammar and canonicity mistakes (although I understand it is your creation and people don't have to be GTA4 geeks like me), most annoying was this:

[Niko: I'm russian not american friend.]

He's a Serb.

But don't get me wrong, I liked your fanon story, only I believe you can do even better. It is kinda short for an opening chapter, yet good enough to introduce all the main characters at once). BTW, some parts of the script don't get right with the characters, particularly Niko.

Overall, a nice, yet flawed, fanfic.