User talk:The GTA Nerd/Dimitri Rascalov, Jr.

A little feedback for you..
This provides an interesting little snippet of fan-fiction. But from a creative viewpoint it does have a few holes, just trying to give you a little bit of constructive criticism. I'm working on my own piece of GTA fan-fiction, centered around a re-emerging The Lost MC so I'm in a similar mind to you. Firstly the name is a little unimaginative, naming his son after himself is a little Niko Jr. is a little narcissistic and more of an American naming custom. I would have gone with something else, maybe Viktor or another Russian name.

Doesn't Dimitri Jr. have a little too much access to assault weapons? Surely his father would keep his son out of his line of 'business' and away from all the guns. Then again he could be being groomed to be his father's successor. I like the whole getting revenge for the death of his father thing though. This needs a tidy up though but it's an interesting story arc. Michelle with a Russian Bratva boss, guess she got a taste for the bad boy types after Niko. Enigma24 (talk) 01:47, June 9, 2013 (UTC)