Talk:Do You Have Protection?

Since I was rv'd, would someone like to explain how the article needs cleanup? It's clear, it's concise, it provides a good amount of information and it's easy to read. Save for piping, this is one of the better articles, from a literary standpoint. That Thing There 19:01, 3 March 2009 (UTC)


 * It's in need of cleanup, beacuse it's written like a walkthrough - mission articles are supposed to just describe; who gives the mission, what happens during the mission, and what the reward is. There's also the extensive use of 'you', which should, instead, be 'the player' or 'Niko'. I do agree that it's clear and easy to read, but I'm merely following GTA Wiki's Policy


 * Just a note that while I agree that cleanup is definitely needed for the word "you"; a walkthrough is fine as long as the instructions are neutral. For example, Drive to the safehouse, pick up Roman, Drive to the airport, catch a plane to Anywhere City, etc, however it is good (in my opinion) to just have a "walkthrough" section and have the brief that says In this mission Niko and Roman catch a plane to Anywhere City. Biggest GTA Fan EverTalk 07:12, 23 March 2009 (UTC)

Please do not alter the format of the video in which you can go fullscreen in the page intsead of having to go to youtubeThe King of Spiders (talk) 22:28, October 2, 2013 (UTC)