User talk:Eganio/Sandbox/1

The Detailed Walkthrough is quite long, so should probably be on a sub-page, and linked to from the main article. Also, I'd split it up into more sections - or have bold brief lines before each paragraph, so people only have to read the bit they need if they're having trouble. Make it very clear what the purpose of each part is (eg following until arriving at the house) to make it useful for everyone. Gboyers talk 00:24, 23 June 2008 (UTC)