User blog comment:Dan67/GTA4 Comic: Niko Meets a New Gang/@comment-26435037-20130415163534

This comic is kinda entertaining yet unoriginal ("a man wants to get power in the city" -> the hero(es) try to stop him. Sonny, Vercetti, CJ and Tenpenny want their cut from this comic)

And I found some grammar and canonicity mistakes (although I understand it is your creation and people don't have to be GTA4 geeks like me), most annoying was this:

[Niko: I'm russian not american friend.]

He's a Serb.

But don't get me wrong, I liked your fanon story, only I believe you can do even better. It is kinda short for an opening chapter, yet good enough to introduce all the main characters at once). BTW, some parts of the script don't get right with the characters, particularly Niko.

Overall, a nice, yet flawed, fanfic.